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I'm fine, I'm okay by funkygirl4ever95lit I'm fine, I'm okay by funkygirl4ever95lit
Poem and photo by me (Yes that's me)

Okay since I'm really new to this I don't know if I put it in the right category. Does this count as free verse poetry or prose instead of visual poetry?

Constructive critique appreciated =]

Inspired by Nothing's wrong
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Dancing-At-Midnight Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really love this.
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ScarecrowsDarkAngel Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it. Its so very true for so many people and most of the time the people closest to them dont even notice. and you are very pretty :)
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XxNightingaleSongxX Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2010
I lie about what I'm going through so that I don't have to see my family and friends suffer. I keep my face blank of emotions, it's better that way.

I love you're poem. Very straight forward and beautiful.
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funkygirl4ever95lit Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
I'm sorry to hear that. I understand exactly what you mean. That's what I used to do as well. Thankfully I am now feeling much better. Anyway, sorry for the late reply. I hope you are feeling better as well :hug: And thanks a lot for the comment :)
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XxNightingaleSongxX Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
As i said, it's better that way. :D If they see me in pain...they're in pain. :( that's why I do it. to keep them out of pain. You did? How did you get over it? It's okay!! I sorta am...I'm taking yoga classes and that will help with my disability.
:glomp: You're welcome!! ;)
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funkygirl4ever95lit Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011
I have sent you a note rather than replying here :)
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XxNightingaleSongxX Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2011
Cool. ^^
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darkelvenfaerie Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2010
I would say it counts as visual poetry.
It is a poem that I think there are many out there that can relate to it.

Write to live...
Live to write..
Blessed Be.
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funkygirl4ever95lit Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2010
okay thanks for telling me =]
I really hope so. I love it when people can relate! :D
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NekoJeanette Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2010  Student General Artist
Yea... I know....
I think that i dont like saying how im feeling
cuz it hurts replying it a lot of times
so i prefer to lie >.>
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